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Do you know about Kumamoto?Kumamoto is a very good place.I like Kumamoto, I tell you about Kumamoto.So, I tell you about Kumamoto.
First, I tell you famous place in Kumamoto.This is a very big mountain.Mt. Aso is very famous.Mt. Aso has caldera the biggest in the world.And Mt. Aso has many nature and cow and horse. It’s very beautiful!!Mt. Aso has five mountains.there are takadake, Nakadake, Nekodake, Eboshidake, and Kijimadake.Mt. Aso is so big.And Aso’s famous place is Aso farm land.It's very famous.You can experience milking and you can eat delicious foods.And the farm land’s soft ice cream is delicious!! You have to eat this. Next I tell you about Kumamoto castle.It's in the middle of kumamoto city. It's very beautiful.And Kumamoto castle has a very long history. kumamoto castle was made in about 1400. Kumamoto Castle is construction of a castle 400.And this was made Kiyomasa Kato.Kumamoto Castle is one of the three major fine castles.The surroundings have it of 5.3 kilometers.So,it’s too big.Kumamoto castle’s sight seeing is very good and beautiful. You have to go there.
Second, I tell you about famous soccer team in Kumamoto.This is ROASSO. Do you know? This is a soccer team in Kumamoto.This team is famous and popular.This team joins to the J. League.Roasso was made in 1969. Roasso means "red" and "ace" in Itarian. Roasso means to incrude Mt.Aso.This club color is "red".It mean country of fire.This team takes part in many games.This team is strong and powerful. So this team is very famous and popular.And this team has a cheering team.And this team has many funs. This cheering team has many persons.This person likes ROASSO very much.This cheering team is very powerful too.ROASSO makes impressed to everyone.
Third I tell you famous foods in Kumamoto.Kuamamoto’s famous food is Basashi, Ikinaridango, Karashirenkon and anything else. It’s very delicious.First, I tell you about Basashi.Basashi is horse’s sasimi.It’s soft.But It’s very delicious.I like it.I often eat Basasi in New Year Day and some celebration day.It’s a little different to Basasi.It’s little hard.And This is white.But it’s yummy.Next I tell you about Ikinaridango.Do you know this?It’s famous in Kumamoto.This is looks like Mochi.But this is like Daifuku.This is in to a sweet potato. This is many kind. Boil ikinaridango, steam ikinaridango, sweet red bean jam’s ikinaridango, and any thing else.It’s different how to cook that maker’s Unfortunately, I dislike red bean jam.So, I couldn’t eat this Ikinaridango.But It’s famous and many people like this. You have to eat this!!
Finally, I tell you about shopping place in Kumamoto.Kumamoto has many shopping place. Forexample, Clair, Hikarinomori, Shimotori, Kamitori, and anything else. It's good places and very convenient. I tell you about Clair and Shimotori, Kamitori. First I tell you about Clair. It's in Kasima town.It’s a big shopping mall. And It’s long shopping mall. It’s have in many many shops. Clothes shop, accessory shop, food shop, movie theater, and anything else. It’s made in recently. I often go there and I enjoy to shopping. You couldn’t see to all shop in a day. Next, I tell you about Shimotori and Kamitori. There is near the Kumamoto castle. There have many shops too. There are several big stores on the side of the street as the Shimotori and Kamitori. Tsuruya, Parco, New-s, and many many shops. Tsuruya is famous depart in Kumamoto. This is on Shimotori. There is many people every day. It's popular. And Parco is many people too. There is popular young people. High school students often go there. And there are anything places. Food shop is many too. Izakaya, first food shop, caffe shop, pasta shop and anything else. You can enjoy to shopping. You have to go there.
There is about Kumamoto. Kumamoto is very good town. So I like it!! You have to go Kumamoto. And I could learn about Kumamoto. So I try to learn another thing. I want to go many many places in Kumamoto. Please come to Kumamoto.

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Summer vacation

we have test soon... It's sad!! but after the test, we have summer vacation!! I'm looking forward to come summer vacation. I want to come summer vacation soon. Because, I planning to go Tokyo Disney land in september!! I'm very very looking forward to go Tokyo Disney Land! Test is bad... but summer vacation is very good for me. Because, It's very long!! And I could came back to Kagoshima. Kagoshima is my home town. So I could to see to my family and my pet. I like my family and my pet, so I want to came back to Kagoshima soon. There is very excited to me. And I want to do anything more in sumer vacation. I will anything to do more. so,I'm looking forward to came summer vacation!!

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Cousin's festival

May 31st was my cousin's sports festival. Today was very good wheather. I went to my cousin's dports festival.I have two cousins. Oldest cousin is Amiri. She is a six grader. this sports festival is last for her. And youngest cousin is Rion. She is a forth grader. The are very cute. They did their best. they looks very fun. First, I watched Amiri's run race. Amiri finished the run race in first place. It's good for her. Second, I watched Rion's Soran dance. It's very beautiful. It's very nice. Next we ate lunch box. This is aunt made. It's very delicious. And it's colorful. Appetizing lunch box were serve isn't it? I ate many many lunch box. After lunch time, I watched tug-of war. It's How great cry out excitedly. I watched sports festival after a long time. I want to join this sports festival. I was liked sports festival. But now, I have no sports festival. It's very sad. But I spend very good time. So I was very happy. Do you want to join sports festival again in student time?

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